Idyll, interrupted.
David Foster Wallace had a technique (see, especially, the short story, Oblivion , in the like-named collection) in which the continuity of a passage is punctuated, no, broken, by a number of asides and would-be clarifications, housed between commas, m-dashes, parentheses, or square brackets which, ostensibly in the name of precision, sometimes do indeed have that effect, but just as often create contradictions (in the case of Oblivion , revealing more about the narrator than the narrator should have intended) which may be revealingly comic or tragic and — through their intervention in the nominally principle (i.e. those not comma-, m-dashed-, parenthese'ed-, or square-bracket-jacked) text — actually do the heavy labor in propelling the narrative forward. As it happens, the short story of Wallace's in which this technique appeared to most acute (the fore-mentioned Oblivion ) includes snoring (in the context of a married couple's dispute over whether or not the narrator (the...